Summary
In "Working at McDonald's," Amitai
Etzioni argues that employed at fast-food chains like as McDonald's has few
advantages than disadvantages for teenagers for many reasons: weakens
performance and school attendance, has no additional ability for teenagers to
study that can be used in future in their lifetime, and provides teenagers an
erroneous attitude about money. Initially, he talks that it has a habit of to
be common for youths to have a part time work while going to school as an
American tradition.
To help or support his thesis, he carries out
the idea of the sidewalk lemonade stand and a newspaper route. He asserts that
these types of works are highly uneducational for the reason that they are
highly routinized. Creativity, initiative, or even elementary reorganizations,
in this working environment, do not take place. Amitai Etzioni said that:
“McDonald's is bad for your kids.” He also cites a point that the students who
work as part-time after they graduate not to get good quality jobs. The author
also claims that these types of work are fit to lower-class more than higher
class.
Critical Response
The Amitai Etzioni writes Working at
McDonald's, article in which he says that part-time jobs such as at McDonald’s
have many disadvantages like as low school attendance and low academic grades,
etc. He said that McDonald's is not good for your children. He also mentioned
that according to studies as two 3rds of USA’s high school seniors and juniors
now doing part-time jobs and in many ways nearer examination, these types of
work highly uneducational. He also tells his reader that the kids who do part
time jobs not get good jobs after getting the degree. The writer point of view
is that part time jobs affected future skills.
The thesis of Amitai Etzioni is not 100%
correct because some students work due to many responsibilities. Some students’
manage his school works with his part time jobs effectively. They get good
academic grades, and many students have experienced due to part-time jobs, so
they get beautiful jobs due to work experiences. Every kid wants to enjoy his
life, but they work due to responsibilities. I want to tell you a story of my
close friend. He studied at school but his parent cannot pay his fee due to
some reason, and he was also having many responsibilities such as home
expenditure, paying for his parent medicine and fee for his little brothers and
sisters, etc.
He works at McDonald’s, and he wants to study
only such as many other children, but his responsibilities did not permit him
to study only. One day he became quite upset due to his responsibilities. He
decides to say good bay to his study. He tells me that I want to become a full-time
worker for McDonald’s. I said him that please didn't stop your study because
due to knowledge you will become a great man. He liked my advice and acted on
it. He continued his study and work at McDonald’s. He was studying with his
earnings and also spends money for his parent and brothers and sisters. When he
sees that he is free immediately, he starts the study.
So when he gives exams, he passes his all
subject with excellent marks. He takes admission in college and continued study
with his part-time job, so he also passes his graduates exam with excellent
marks. Now he is a manager at McDonald’s. The work experience demonstrates us a
lot of knowledge which we cannot be educated in schools because many companies
focus on work experience. So the Amitai Etzioni write a good article for
teenagers but not excellent because part-time jobs have many advantages with
its disadvantages.
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